This is a wonderfully tense and emotionally charged short story. The premise—of a seemingly innocent name choice turning into a battle over family inheritance—pulls the reader in with a strong sense of suspense and underlying resentment. It’s clear that something is simmering beneath the surface between the characters, and the gradual revelation of Emily’s motives adds layers to the story, creating a complicated portrait of family dynamics, jealousy, and guilt.

What I particularly love is how the name “Martin” becomes more than just a name; it symbolizes deeper struggles, buried emotions, and the idea of who gets to claim what is rightfully theirs. The dialogue and descriptions reflect the internal and external conflicts beautifully—especially the tension between the sisters, which is palpable even in the simplest exchanges.