The emotional complexity of both sisters is well-drawn. Emily, with her apparent bitterness and feelings of being overlooked, contrasts sharply with the protagonist, who seems to have lived a life of assumed closeness to their mother. And the shocking twist about the forged will is both heartbreaking and believable, cementing Emily’s desperation and sense of betrayal.

Overall, this story offers a blend of suspense and familial tragedy, with a dash of moral ambiguity that makes readers question the lengths to which they would go for love, inheritance, and legacy. It’s a gripping and emotional journey.Would you like feedback on any specific part of the story or suggestions for improvement?